Maestro expanded my original poem into something magical. Have a look.
Applied Linguistics graduate by chance - Artist, Photographer, Poetess and Story-Teller by choice.
November 13, 2015 at 12:29 am
Oooh dayuuum that’s so interesting!
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November 13, 2015 at 3:25 am
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November 13, 2015 at 8:53 am
Ikr? Shukria. 🙂
November 13, 2015 at 12:54 pm
Ek naya transliteration banta hai yaar. Nayab sahab said it’s available here.
November 13, 2015 at 1:38 pm
Erm. Okay I’ll type it out. Stay tuned.
November 13, 2015 at 2:01 pm
Here you go, Superman. 🙂
“mujhe yeh zameen raas nahi aati
suna hai chaand taaron mein bhi hai mohabbat bohat
apne dil mein jhaank kabhi dekh wahan
abad ulfat se hai udhar poora aik jahan
sirf kashish e saqal ka kamaal hai aur kuch nahi
chaand taaron mein hai nahi mohabbat bohat
be jaa hai tera kashish e saqal ka bahana
saqal kuch nahi, mohabbat pay hai pahra
jab utthay ga hashar ko saqal ka parda
mil jaye ga lapat kar har chaand har taara
jaane kyun shaam dhaltey hi udasi hai chhaa jati
suna hai aftaab aur maghrib mein bhi hai mohabbat bohat
band ishq pay hai lehrata udasi ka jhanda
aashiq pay qehar hai sooraj ka doob jana
din aur raat ke tabadlay ke usool hain aur kuch nahi
Sooraj aur maghrib mein hai nahi mohabbat bohat
chalo mohabbat na sahi kuch tabadlah kar lo
aik gilah hum karen aik tum shikwah kar lau
aur Sooraj ka maghrib mein lahoo ho jana ?
kher is pay surkhi ka nafiz Fatwa kar lau
romaaniat ke sur najaney kyun hai tahazeeb gaati
suna hai gul o bulbul mein bhi hai mohabbat bohat
maggas ka baagh mein jana, parwanay ki mout
tashnagi e bulbul bujhana, Gul divanay ki mout
talab e arq e gul , khuwahish e bulbul hai aur kuch nahi
Gul o bulbul mein hai nahi mohabbat bohat
wafa se bandha howa hai dhaga jafaa ka
nahi janti hai mohabbat maienay mahaah ka
Gul taalib e deedar, bulbul ki gharz aur
yun hi chalta raha hai yeh rishta nibaah ka
mein aaj tak na badla yeh baat samajh nahi aati
suna hai logon ko badal deti hai mohabbat bohat
Qais laila se qabal bhi tha majnu bismil
laila ke baad bhi raha jon ka ton bismil
bas falsfiyana kitabi baatein hain aur kuch nahi
ya shayad is se mujhe thi nahi mohabbat bohat
falsafa e ishq nahi kisi kitaab mein nayaab
ho chuki ulfat, jahan kharab mein nayaab
badla to kuch nahi baad az mohabbat vle
raha nahi phir kabhi woe nayaab mein nayaab”
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November 20, 2015 at 8:03 pm
Shukriya Mahaah. Ab toh yeh aur bhi complete lagne laga hai. Well done you two. It feels like a beautiful conversation now. Good job Nayab!
November 21, 2015 at 8:19 am
That’s nice to know 🙂 Where have you been?
November 21, 2015 at 9:49 am
Just caught up with work issues. Travelling and stuff.
November 13, 2015 at 4:50 pm
Thank you mahaah. Many poeple will understand it here
November 13, 2015 at 4:53 pm
Its maggas it means shahed ki makhi.
Plus its bismil it is my second takhalus it means someone who is about to die. 🙂
November 13, 2015 at 11:53 pm
I turn my back for a few and woaaah what’s going on here. Y’all have taken over WP. Proud to have you Mahaah. Maestro and you make a powerful team. Keep the collabs coming.
November 14, 2015 at 7:00 pm
Hahaha.. Guess that will be my last post for a few weeks. Exams and busy days coming ahead, so I am holding myself back.
I’m proud to have you too, Honey bunch. ❤
November 15, 2015 at 6:32 am
Awww no, now that I am back you are off.
Will miss you boo. Come back soon and all the best for your papers.
November 15, 2015 at 7:56 am
Sed lyf. Yeah sure. I write more during exams lol. But this time I’ll post them all jb exams khatam hon gy 🙂
Thank you for the best wishes, guess they’ll help me make it out alive 😛
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