After a delicious sit-down dinner her brother suggested to have a walk on the beach. So they all agreed and followed. At one point everyone wandered far away and she started taking photographs of the moon shining brightly with its full glory and its beautiful reflection on the roaring waters of the sea. The air pressure that crossed through her body made her realize that the pressure life had given her was nothing as compared to it. She was so indulged in feeling the atmosphere around her that she almost forgot that she’d been there for a long time. That was when she turned around and found him standing behind her, looking directly at her. She had a minor heart attack as it was not appropriate for them to be there, one on one. They were together and alone after a long time. There was silence among them since the bad stuff happened. Both of them wanted to talk to one another for years, but they couldn’t. The circumstances didn’t allow them, nor did their ego. “So you like nature?” he asked as he had sensed that she was in a state of shock and tried to calm down the situation. She nodded and said, “Yes”. “Photography is cool stuff.” he gave his opinion without being asked for it. She agreed. “I think I should go now.” she tried her best to get rid of the awkward situation by leaving the spot at once. She knew that he was trouble whenever he walked into her life. She knew that something’s going to happen and she wanted to have control of things that she could control. “Wait, I want to talk to you.” he said as she turned around. Her heart started beating furiously, as if it would fall to the ground and he’d be able to step on it again. She faked her confidence to the next level and asked, “Hmm?”. He came closer and she stepped back. He took a deep breath and asked, “Why did you do that?” She didn’t have any idea of what he was referring to. She replied with a question, “Do what?” He said, “You know very well. Whatever I’m talking about.” She didn’t want it to go insanely awkward. Without any further delay, she said, “No, I don’t. I need to leave. Right now.” She was turning around again when he held her hand and dragged her even closer. She was startled at first, but then boldly said, “Leave my hand. I said leave my hand!” He replied, “I didn’t hold it to let go of it. Stop struggling you’re hurting yourself. Stop with that. It’s enough now.” She realized that he was right. She had already struggled so much. Through her life, through all those years, all she had ever done was struggle and survive. Giving up, she said, “Alright. What did I do?”. “Why didn’t you tell me that you love me?” he asked fiercely. Looking away, she replied, “I had a crush on you and that’s it. I never loved you, nor will I, ever.” He didn’t believe what he had heard and asked again, “Look into my eyes. You’re lying. After all this time, you’re still hiding. Please don’t repeat your mistakes. Tell me. Please?” He turned her face with the help of his hand, and found tear drops sparkling in her eyes. She asked, “How did you get to know that?”. He smiled and said, “You’re still worrying about that. Whatever the source was, you should have told me by yourself. Why didn’t you?”. Feeling like a failure, she admitted, “Yes. I wanted to. But you left mid-way. I was unable to do anything. And you always made me feel like I never existed. How could I say it straightaway? You played it wrong.” He confessed, “Yes. I was. I thought that it would be better to stay away from you when all that mess happened. I thought that I’d be safe. But. I never was. You never left my mind. I liked you too. I feel like I should have known. You should have made me know that.” She asked, “As if it was easy?” He said, “Hmm. It was not. But.”. She answered, “There’s no room for ifs and buts now. Thankyou. Let me go now?” and pointed to her hand which was still in his’. He couldn’t break the eye contact. She had something in her dark mysterious eyes and he couldn’t just stop. Black eyes that always had reflected his image back. Eyes that belonged to a person he had always ignored. His own self was now criticizing him of all his previous ill manners and sick etiquettes. The girl he had broken into a mess of jagged pieces was now standing in front of him in a charming and perfectly molded mosaic. A mosaic that was sparkling and shining brighter than the moon. She spoke in a gentle voice, “Hey?” and waved to stop him from staring. He couldn’t figure the reason behind her voice sounding so sweet and delicate to him. Every word she said felt like an embossed print on his heart. He didn’t know what time was doing to him. He didn’t know where life was steering him. Submitting himself to fate, he decided to go with the flow. A few waves struck the shore as if they were celebrating their new mate, who, just like them, was going with the flow. He said, “Oh. Just know I’m in love with you. You can decide what you want for yourself.” She was shockingly surprised and astonishingly amazed at this sudden confession but overwhelmed at the same time. Tears started rolling down her cheeks and falling down her face. It was happening, after all this time, it was happening. He hugged her, rubbing his hands on her back, trying to console her. She heard him breathing. Smelling the pleasant cologne he was wearing, she wanted to bury her head forever in that fragrant chest. In that cold windy weather, she felt warm. She moved her head up and kissed him. That was when a wave splashed and wet their clothes. The splashing wave was actually water being sprayed on her in order to wake her up. It was only a dream.
29.1.2015
~Mahaah.
December 7, 2015 at 9:56 pm
Well the boy was a fool tbh. Glad it changed at the end. Sounds like someone I know
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December 7, 2015 at 9:56 pm
Mhmm.
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December 7, 2015 at 9:57 pm
Someone is mad at someone. Hope they will forgive like the girl in the post.
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December 7, 2015 at 9:58 pm
She didn’t forgive him. She woke up. To reality.
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December 7, 2015 at 10:00 pm
What if her dream was his reality and what she thought of him was not correct?
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December 7, 2015 at 10:02 pm
One never knows. Ignorance is bliss.
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December 7, 2015 at 10:03 pm
Why abandoning after the knowledge? Does it make people less attractive?
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December 7, 2015 at 10:04 pm
Perhaps.
When you get to know their real being, they don’t seem as tempting as they did before.
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December 7, 2015 at 10:05 pm
What if it was just a moment? Can a moment define a lifetime?
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December 7, 2015 at 10:06 pm
Sometimes, wrong steps weigh more than the entire walk.
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December 7, 2015 at 10:07 pm
And what if they feel guilty? Do they deserve a second chance?
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December 7, 2015 at 10:08 pm
A second chance, yes. But a fourth chance, no.
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December 7, 2015 at 10:09 pm
So no way back? What if they promise of change?
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December 7, 2015 at 10:10 pm
Then they gotta practice-prove their promise first.
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December 7, 2015 at 10:10 pm
How? Is there any way of showing it other than the faith?
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December 7, 2015 at 10:13 pm
No, theres no other way. They’ll know when they are on the right track. On the right time. At the the right place.
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December 7, 2015 at 10:14 pm
And till then? They have to suffer the dagger of solitude? After Having already lost a friend?
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December 7, 2015 at 10:18 pm
They’re not alone.
The count is messed up a bit. Edit “a” with “numerous”.
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December 7, 2015 at 10:19 pm
Doesn’t that make them more miserable? No one has hold them.
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December 7, 2015 at 10:21 pm
No. No one’s miserable. Misery is self invited and portrayed.
The entire world can’t be wrong against one person -.-
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December 8, 2015 at 6:55 am
Mahaah! Write more.. or else I am gonna have to stalk you more deeply. XD
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December 8, 2015 at 7:31 am
Is it that good?
Well I will try my best to. Thank you 🙂
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December 8, 2015 at 12:33 pm
Yep!
Welcome 🙂
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December 8, 2015 at 9:46 am
Fact: I have unfortunately, a romantic personality, but I also run away from romance.
Like yeah I enjoy coffee at night, and I like to count stars, and I like to walk on grass barefoot, and I love the beach, but like, alone.
Or maybe with a friend that I really trust.
But I don’t like romancing or even romanticizing the idea of romancing with people .-.
Some one whack me on the head, I need some awakening of my senses XD
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December 8, 2015 at 9:50 am
But you’re a very nice writer.
You can improve though.
Like try explaining a persons posture a little more explicitly. That helps readers understand the characters’ reaction via body language.
Don’t be discouraged okay? It’s only a friendly suggestion 🙂 💐💐
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December 8, 2015 at 10:00 am
Well I was waiting for criticism. Nobody criticizes me :3 That is why.
Well anyway, I don’t like this love thing anymore. Its an old writing. I wanted to make the word count above 1000, so I expanded the original and posted it cuz it looked good haha.
Ill try what you said tho. thank you.
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December 8, 2015 at 10:02 am
Plus. I always wanted to express things like this. So I am practicing this ajkal. Very much.
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December 8, 2015 at 10:20 am
Oh. Not bad though. I mean if this is old, then I believe your previous piece was recent? If that’s the case, then you have improved. I liked that one better than this. It had a better flow. 🙂
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December 8, 2015 at 1:59 pm
Yeah. My previous piece was written two days before I posted it. This one is ten months old 🙂 and thank you so much!
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December 8, 2015 at 2:09 pm
Aha! It was a pleasure, Mahaah ☺️
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December 8, 2015 at 2:22 pm
You’re a nice person, Hiba.
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December 8, 2015 at 2:52 pm
Thank you that. 🙂
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December 8, 2015 at 2:53 pm
You’re always welcome.
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December 8, 2015 at 2:58 pm
☺️✨🌷
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December 10, 2015 at 7:51 am
Ahem! No body? U sure?
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December 10, 2015 at 7:52 am
Mhmm. “Nobody”. Pun intended.
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December 10, 2015 at 9:13 am
I know what u did there.
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December 16, 2015 at 1:06 pm
Oh, never Imagined it would end that way. Loved the beautiful imaginative world you created in our mind with your words. I love photographing moon too, by the way. Really in love with your writing. Keep it up !
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December 16, 2015 at 5:07 pm
^ Says the girl who is perfect at writing amazing stuff. I repeat, perfect.
I am so happy to read your comment, LalaRukh. Seriously. Thank you so much for stopping by.
Lol I love unexpected endings. I am in love with your writing too 🙂 You too keep shining!
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December 16, 2015 at 6:36 pm
Haha, that’s so overwhelming. So glad to know that you know me and read me, really you made my day. Love you so much.
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December 16, 2015 at 6:40 pm
We’ve had two-three conversations I guess. On wordpress. So yeah. 🙂 And yes I have read a lot on your blog.
Aw. Thanks 🙂 I heart you too.
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December 20, 2015 at 1:03 pm
Woa.
Beach + night + lives.
“The girl he had broken into a mess of jagged pieces was now standing in front of him in a charming and perfectly molded mosaic.”
❤
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December 21, 2015 at 3:06 pm
🙂
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